3 thoughts on “Jillian Jones”

  1. Luckily, the out of focus shot of the man laying in the field works really well, but I would maybe consider adding a few different clips to go on the bottom part to capture more “simple things”.

  2. What worked great is the different shots, different perspectives, showing him looking out at various things while she was only focused on him the whole time. one thing I would change is maybe at the end have the view of his perspective follow what we actually see him looking at such as when he looks at the other person showing her in his perspective..

  3. I like how the split screens look visually, but it does draw attention away from the concept of love on both sides of the camera. The man’s face is out of focus too which makes me want to focus on the nature behind him more than his face.

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